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Comments from Zededd
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-10-08 00:03:17 | Savannah_(0) | As well written as this is, one short paragraph of actual pregnancy doesn't really deserve the tag. Nobody would go to a 'race' if they spent seven hours talking about it, then five minutes actually racing. |
| 2020-10-08 00:13:16 | raped in my kitchn by an intuder | I've been through about ten stories on here, this is the first one in the 'pregnant' category that uses the word 'pregnant' more than five times. A good story that seems a little glossed over in places, but it is a very enjoyable read! |
| 2020-10-08 00:15:38 | My daughter ask to massauge me | This isn't as bad as it seems at first glance, but it needs a proper spell-check and to get rid of the pointless line breaks. It's a start, but I'm sorry to say you need to practice before you're at a 'public display' level. |