| 2013-03-22 05:38:04 |
My Photogenic Mom Chapter 1_(0)
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Paragraphs? Makes it easier to read, and at the beginning you say he had the car for his 18th, yet he went through his mums panty drawer when he was 10...6 years ago?? Try and keep some consistency, I couldnt finish the story but I have a good feeling it was going to get better |
| 2013-03-21 16:57:05 |
Little Girl_(2)
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This was awesome, got any more in the pipeline? |
| 2013-06-24 14:46:58 |
After School_(4)
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How is this still at the top of the best stories?? Considering it ISNT a story? |
| 2013-06-25 17:48:25 |
After School_(4)
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Still no text yet 100%?? BULLSHIT!!! |
| 2013-07-30 05:40:36 |
After School_(4)
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This is bullshit, how its got 100% I have no idea, fake as a motherfucker! |