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Comments from solarxxxsteve
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-10-25 20:09:59 | Summer Breeze. | you know this only needs a little editing to be the first part of a series... yes it ended unexpectedly, but fill in more detail at the beginning (tip: go east on the 1/2 sentence paragraphs) and since you have left it open for continuation why not continue it? ~S |
| 2016-02-07 03:40:15 | Paying The Piper | there's a lot of grammatical errors but still an interesting read. |
| 2016-02-07 05:24:26 | Little Cindy's Texas Adventure | Yes I read this story a few years ago. it disappeared then resurfaced. a bit unreal towards the end. still good though. |