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Comments from Scubasage
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-09-06 12:59:57 | Her Time of Need | I'm working on part 2. It should be finished in a couple of days, so expect to see it up next week. There's also plans for a part 3, which I will start as soon as I'm done part 2. |
| 2010-09-13 17:49:17 | It's a nice concept, but there's so many run on sentences, grammatical errors and so little description that well, it completely turned me off. If you fix the errors and flesh it out a bit, it could be very good though. Keep working on it :) |