| 2010-12-05 22:13:46 |
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Thank you for the critisism... I will take it into and improve my writing skills. This is m first story after all. More to come, and this time it will be better :) |
| 2010-12-05 22:14:16 |
Fun at the Movies_(1)
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Thank you for the critisism... I will take it into and improve my writing skills. This is m first story after all. More to come, and this time it will be better :) |
| 2010-12-05 22:15:25 |
Fun at the Movies_(1)
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Thank you for the critisism. This is my first story. The next one will be better, I have improved on it. |
| 2010-12-08 08:07:12 |
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oh, damn! didn't notice that! thanks for pointing it out tho... next story will be better, i promise :) |