| 2011-03-28 00:31:22 |
Nightwolf Part 2
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Your writing is vivid. Which is good, but it seems you focused purely on sex. It was hot and definitely got ME hard lol. Unfortunately, the previous story I like more. It seemed to have more of a plot. Keep writing, your good. Your imagination is intense, I love it. ^_~` keep going I want to read more :D |
| 2011-03-28 00:32:04 |
Nightwolf Part 2
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Your writing is vivid. Which is good, but it seems you focused purely on sex. It was hot and definitely got ME hard lol. Unfortunately, the previous story I like more. It seemed to have more of a plot. Keep writing, your good. Your imagination is intense, I love it. ^_~` keep going I want to read more :D |
| 2011-03-28 00:32:20 |
Nightwolf Part 2
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Your writing is vivid. Which is good, but it seems you focused purely on sex. It was hot and definitely got ME hard lol. Unfortunately, the previous story I like more. It seemed to have more of a plot. Keep writing, your good. Your imagination is intense, I love it. ^_~` keep going I want to read more :D |