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Comments from blue.beard
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-05-03 06:36:55 | Fucking Paradise | Reminds me of the old Victorian erotic novels. Well done. I think one reason that you haven't had much voting was the story is too long to read in one sitting. It would have been better if you had published one or two chapters at a time. |
| 2014-06-25 05:33:44 | The King in Yellow_(0) | I'm probably the only other reader that has read the original King in Yellow. It's been out of print for years:( Well done, it creates the same atmosphere as the original... |
| 2014-05-10 10:34:03 | Fucking Paradise | I was just thinking: you seem to have described every consensual, non harming perversion available to these characters... In those days, funeral homes were very rare. Usually the body would lay in state at the residence until the funeral. A missed opportunity here was not having a scene of necrophilia when Estella died... |