| 2014-04-06 03:24:37 |
Lisa (Jessica) - Chapter 4 - Reminded of her place
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Can't wait for chapter 5 love this story |
| 2015-05-09 00:41:54 |
Fun filled night home alone
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Its is not stolen I posted it on here 4 years ago n reposted it now to get people to comment so I could improve but comments like that are just rude so thank you for crushing someone's dream of writing |
| 2015-05-09 00:50:38 |
Fun filled night home alone
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I am sorry to anyone who enjoyed and those who didn't but aren't rude for the grammar errors I don't have anyone to proof read for and have a problem writing grammatically correct |
| 2015-05-10 04:59:19 |
Fun filled night home alone
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I posted it under the same name and I can take there's a difference between constructive criticism and being a deck. |
| 2015-05-10 05:07:42 |
Fun filled night home alone
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Ok so she don't have correct grammar not everyone has good grammar besides she comes from a family of rednecks and this is her older sister on her account I doubt any of u are perfect and be correct all the time I also do that I all could be that imaginative so a maybe u could be less rude and be more constructive and maybe get a better personality and get ur head out a where the sun don't shine!!!!!!!!! |