| 2012-10-24 09:44:18 |
Broken Birds, Part 1, Beth's Agony
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The sex did feel out of place in this story. I voted up though, until the end scene i forgot I was reading an erotic story. That is some grade A writing. The introduction says it was based on true events,which if true I feel for the girl, the whole situation could happen though realistically, emotional barrier breakdowns happen like this. Regardless I'm finishing this series, true or not your writing quality is amazing. It would make an awesome full book. |