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Comments from hellequin
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-05-29 09:48:24 | The Trainee | This is quite painful to read. Not as bad as other stories, but needs work. The plot was great at the start, but having such a build up for so little sex... Ehh, it could be extended a bit more. Dont get me wrong, I like it and it can be great, it just needs some tweeks. If you want some help, I would be glad to assist you, but only if you want it. |
| 2013-05-29 09:49:02 | The Trainee | This is quite painful to read. Not as bad as other stories, but needs work. The plot was great at the start, but having such a build up for so little sex... Ehh, it could be extended a bit more. Dont get me wrong, I like it and it can be great, it just needs some tweeks. If you want some help, I would be glad to assist you, but only if you want it. |