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Comments from lolathefabulous
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-08-21 15:54:05 | Stan and Wendy Part 2 | They story itself was good. I read both parts. But the amount of grammatical errors gave me a headache. Aside from spelling, you didn't stay in the same tense, words were used incorrectly, punctuation was a problem, and perhaps my biggest pet peeve of all, when I stands alone it is ALWAYS capital. I am not saying this to be a bitch or anything. I could actually help you fix it, if you wanted. This is purely constructive criticism. As I said, the story itself is great, but it is hard to follow because of all the errors. |