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Comments from Zarel
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-01-30 00:55:42 | Kathy Becomes a Human Breeding Slave P.2 | Good but needs to be longer, liked the first but it did seem overly detailed since you only got as far as her finger fucking herself |
| 2012-01-30 00:59:15 | Kathy Becomes a Human Breeding Slave P.2 | Oh and work on spelling, grammar, and wording. You have talent :) maybe write a real story instead of a sex blog sometime lol |