| 2012-07-10 03:19:16 |
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Feel free to comment on this story plz..I also have a part two to it. I would like to know what you thought of the story. |
| 2012-07-10 03:29:45 |
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Just in case you didnt see the previous comment I do have a part two for this story which will finish it off. Would love some feed back |
| 2012-07-10 04:09:17 |
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Yeah like I said this is my first attempt i hope Pt 2 is better |
| 2012-07-10 20:42:40 |
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Sorry guys the last part was supposed to say
"Hello Bryce." to end the chapter review.... |
| 2012-07-10 21:03:42 |
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That wasnt the intent of the story...She was a bitch to him so he killed her |