| 2013-09-15 22:50:39 |
The New Girls - Chapter 1: The arrival
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Anon who couldn't follow, what didn't you follow? What do you think would help improve the story a bit. This was our first story so it was just a rough outline sort of and we just wanted to see what we need to improve on and what we need to keep going. |
| 2013-09-15 22:50:55 |
The New Girls - Chapter 1: The arrival
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Anon who couldn't follow, what didn't you follow? What do you think would help improve the story a bit. This was our first story so it was just a rough outline sort of and we just wanted to see what we need to improve on and what we need to keep going. |