| 2009-04-16 20:27:22 |
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I liked the story but one thing I've noticed a lot is that even when it comes to rape stories or the like the girl ends up liking it. It's cool sometimes because that's fantasy but sometimes it's cool to let her hate being raped. I thought you did a great job and I'm not trying to critisize your creativeness just making an observation keep it up. |