| 2014-04-19 15:37:39 |
ORCS ELFS HUMANS & more: Chapter 1 Royce (The orc and the human)
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I already posted chapter two |
| 2014-04-19 11:06:30 |
ORCS ELFS HUMANS & more: Chapter 1 Royce (The orc and the human)
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Thanks for the comments that are actually about the story. Thanks to the critique about grammar too. I will try to improve on it. The thing is that I am not a first language speaker but I thing I should be able to improve my grammar a little. Syntax might be more of a challenge. You are right I will try to consider the negative feedback. If you people have ideas on which way you would like the story to head please inform me. I have written 45 pages with this so far on A4 word. But since I did this for me in the beginning I doubt that the change in story will suit everyone. For one there is a lot more SEX, then there are two new main characters. One a monster like demon creature building up an army. (He might soon meet Zed as they are both in the Forrest, and two a boy named Zed. But I might like to rewrite the story because I believe that there is too much bi sexual content. Please tell me what your personal thoughts are. I check here often so its worth your say. Public votes are open |
| 2014-04-19 11:09:10 |
ORCS ELFS HUMANS & more: Chapter 1 Royce (The orc and the human)
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Thanks for the comments that are actually about the story. Thanks to the critique about grammar too. I will try to improve on it. The thing is that I am not a first language speaker but I thing I should be able to improve my grammar a little. Syntax might be more of a challenge. You are right I will try to consider the negative feedback. If you people have ideas on which way you would like the story to head please inform me. I have written 45 pages with this so far on A4 word. But since I did this for me in the beginning I doubt that the change in story will suit everyone. For one there is a lot more SEX, then there are two new main characters. One a monster like demon creature building up an army. (He might soon meet Zed as they are both in the Forrest, and two a boy named Zed. But I might like to rewrite the story because I believe that there is too much bi sexual content. Please tell me what your personal thoughts are. I check here often so its worth your say. Public votes are open |