| 2015-08-24 02:42:07 |
Sons New Hobby part 3_(1)
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So this is an idea I was toying around with. What if I bring in the father for a threesome or possibly some bi-sexual moment. Nothing is set in stone but I would love the feedback |
| 2015-07-26 07:01:04 |
Son's new hobby
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the next part is almost finished im writing the last few parts of it. it should be out in about two to three days and i have the next two parts ideas picked ill give you a list but not in order so have fun guesing, another fucking in the shower and bedroom,masturbation, and a gangbang |
| 2015-07-27 17:52:15 |
Son's new hobby
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have you not read some of the other story on this site they look like the guy who wrote them had a stroke while writing it. also 3 million viewers i haven't even broken 20000. as much as i enjoy the criticism since it comes from a good state of mind such as yours you kinda blowing the whole view count out of the water. also if my mistakes are ruining the story how come most of my ratings have been very good. i don't have an major in english nor am i a full time writer sure i miss a few words here and there and maybe my phrases are a little basic or sound a little goofy but its not as bad is it could |
| 2015-07-24 00:50:23 |
Son's new hobby
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It's a little hard to have someone proof read it since this is a little out of the ordinary for me to write literotica. The gang bang idea is something that I really want to do. I'm think about maybe bringing in the father so he can make his mom the family whore. Also the pregnant idea is good to |