Hello Readers, thanks for checking out my first attempt at erotic writing. This is just a rough draft of an uncompleted story, I'm looking for any feedback to help improve the quality of my work for the finished piece. As of now I haven't given my characters identities, so i apologize in advance for the overuse of pronouns. I hope you enjoy the story!
He awoke suddenly, groggily the man slowly rubbed his eyes and stretched, his body was sore and tense for he had fallen asleep in an uncomfortable chair at a friend's house. As he opened his eyes he saw it was still night time and the house is almost completely dark, his mouth was dry so he decided to get up and grab some water, as he walked down a hallway towards the kitchen he paused for a moment when he thought he heard a faint sound from one of the rooms in the Hall.
"That kind of sounded like a moan," he thought to himself.
Still half-asleep, he shook his head and didn't think much of it. He walked into the kitchen and opened the fridge, the bright light hurt his eyes and made him groan, after grabbing a bottle of water he quickly closed the door and took a long drink. he was fully awake now as he wandered back to the chair, he was thinking of just going back to sleep when he heard the noise again.
"Okay, that was definitely a moan,"
Looking around he realized the sound was coming from his friend's room, and he could see a soft light coming from under the door. He crept towards the door quietly, as he got near it he could clearly hear her excited moaning and rapid breathing, he could hear her voice softly whispering to herself, but couldn't make out what she was saying.
The man could feel his cock hardening at the thought of what she must be doing right now. He couldn't help himself as he grabbed the doorknob and quietly opened the door, in the soft light of her muted T.V. he could see her laying in bed a blanket covered the lower half of her body, her dark hair framed her pale skin and beautiful features, her eyes were closed, but her mouth was open in ecstasy, breathing heavily and moaning in pleasure. Her right hand was squeezing one of her large soft breasts through her black lacy bra, the other hand was under her blanket frantically rubbing her pussy.
He couldn't believe his eyes, he had wanted her for so long and now she was right here in front of him passionately masturbating, oblivious to the fact that he was watching. He was fully erect now, hard cock straining against the zipper of his pants and he couldn't take his eyes off of the wondrous sight before him. He tried to discreetly open the door a little further but it creaked enough to get her attention.
Terrified, he thought to himself "Oh God I'm doomed, she is gonna kill me for his,"
He had expected her to scream and yell at him to get out, but that isn't what happened at all, instead she didn't even stop rubbing herself. She locked eyes with him in the dim light, she glanced downward to see the noticeable bulge in his pants, smiling naughtily as she beckoned him closer with a wave of her finger. He nervously walked towards her, his heart pounding as he gazed at her lustfully.
He couldn't believe this was happening. She giggled playfully as he walked up to her bedside, she reached out and began stroking the man's cock through his pants.
"It was sweet of you to bring me what I really wanted right now," she said quietly and smiled lustily," Why don't you pull it out so I can play with it?"
The man was quick to oblige, still in shock he unhooked his belt and took it off, next he unbuttoned his pants and let them slide to the ground. She grabbed the front of his boxers and pulled them down enough for his cock to spring out at her, wrapping her small soft hand around his shaft. She began to stroke hard cock slowly, while her other hand was busy sliding her fingers deeper into her dripping pussy under the covers.
He couldn't stop the moan that escaped his lips as she gripped his dick and pulled him closer, she glanced up and looked him in the eyes a quick moment before she suddenly wrapped her lips around the head of his cock, sucking on it greedily, her soft lips felt like magic on his swollen member.
She bobbed her head up and down slowly working more of it into her mouth, she grabbed his balls and massaged them as she licked his shaft from base to tip several times. She had just started sucking on his cock again when he grabbed one of her large soft breasts and squeezed, he could feel her hard nipple poking through the thin lacy fabric of her bra. Arching her back slightly, she finally pulled her hand out of her panties and grasped his hand and pulled it from her breast and down towards her soaking pussy.
He could feel just how wet her underwear was, he felt her velvety lips through the sheer material, he used his middle and index finger to rub her slit through her panties. He pinched her clitoral hood around her clit, pinching and rolling gently and she began moving her hips rhythmically, grinding against his hand.
She moaned with her mouth full of his shaft as his fingers worked their way into her. Several minutes passed as they passionately played with each other, breathing heavily she could feel herself about to cum, her back arched higher and her hips moved wildly, moaning loudly as she came, her juices flowing out all over his hand.
"Mmmm, I'm happy I could make you cum so quick," he said as he licked his fingers, enjoying her sweet taste.
"Don't get too full of yourself Mister, " she replied with a smile," I was working on myself a long time before you walked in on me."
She crawled out of her bed, grabbing a hair tie off of her nightstand. She pulled her hair back into a ponytail and kneeled in front of him, " I guess it's only fair I finish you off too."
With a quick wink and smile she took his entire cock in her mouth in one smooth motion, her lips touching the base of his shaft and stayed there for several seconds while looking straight up at him while she gagged on his dick. Slowly, she pulled away sucking hard as she did, then she throated his cock several more times. Her eyes watered and she was running short on air when she finally took her mouth off of his cock, while she caught her breath she stroked his cock easily since it was now heavily coated in her saliva.
He took advantage of the short break to say," I have an idea, why don't you lean back for me?" she looked at him questioningly but did as he asked. He hooked a finger under her bra and lifted it enough to slide his slippery dick between her big soft breasts, it felt like pure heaven.
He moved his hips slowly so he could enjoy every second, with each thrust the tip of his cock poked out from the top of her cleavage, and she playfully licked the tip every time. She grabbed her breasts and squeezed them together tightly around his stiff cock, rubbing up and down his shaft slowly at first, then faster and faster.
After a while his cock started throbbing and he knew he couldn't last too much longer so he pulled out from her heavenly tits and he grabbed her head by the base of her ponytail and started fucking her eager mouth. He could feel his tip hitting the back of her throat with each thrust, his cock swelled as his orgasm approached.
" Oh God, I'm so close!" he exclaimed, and she just looked up at him, and increased her pace until he came directly in her mouth. He shot stream after stream of hot cum down her throat, which she tried valiantly to swallow it all but it was too much and some leaked out around his cock and dripped down her chin and onto her breasts.
"You were really backed-up weren't you, i didn't expect that much cum, at least it tastes good" she gasped, while still trying to catch her breath. She scooped up the strands of sticky semen on her tits and licked them off her fingers.
"I still am, and I ain't anywhere near done with you yet," he said, the sight of her licking up his cum had made his dick fully hard again and he wanted nothing more than to slide it into her tight little holes.
He picked her up off the ground and bent her over the bed, he pressed up against her, his hard cock rubbing against her pussy lips through her wet panties. She grinded up against him as he undid the clasp on the back of her lacey bra. As she let her bra fall off her shoulders he flipped her over onto her back, her large breasts bounced pleasantly from the motion.
"Holy shit, those are even more incredible that I imagined," He exclaimed as he ran his hands up her legs, squeezing her shapely ass, then moving his right hand up her side and grabbing a firm handful of her perfect breast. he couldn't resist leaning close and sucking on her nipples one at a time, teasing them with his tongue and lips until they hardened. She wrapped her legs around his hips as he played with her sensitive breasts.
"Stop teasing me, I don't want to wait anymore, Fuck me already," she demanded.
Eager to oblige, he took his attention off of her breasts and slipped her panties off. He hooked his arms under her knees and grabbed her sides just above the hips, while she grabbed his cock and guided it into her wet little cunt. They moaned together as he slid the first few inches into her slowly, he savored every second as he worked his shaft deeper with each motion of his hips, until he had buried his entire length into the greatest pussy he had ever experienced.
He pulled her closer to him so her ass was now hanging off of the bed, and he quickened his pace, finding a steady rhythm as he slammed his cock deep inside of her. he continued this for a couple minutes before he pushed her back onto the bed further so he could climb on top of her, her ankles rested over his shoulders while he held her legs together as he fucked her. She spread her legs and wrapped them around his waist, and started playing with her breasts, squeezing them and pinching her nipples.
His thrusts were slow and deep, he slid his hands up her body, grabbed her hands and pinned them above her head. Their loud moans echoed throughout the empty house as the tempo of their lovemaking increased. They stared into each other's eyes as he slammed his dick in her faster, burying himself as deep as he could inside of her, his balls slapping wetly against her ass. He grabbed her right leg and put it up over his shoulder and turned her on her side he wrapped one arm around her right thigh and grabbed a handful of her soft tits as he steadily fucked her for several more moments before she decided she wanted to change things up.
"You've been fucking me this whole time, now I want to ride you," she said with a devilish grin, and without a second thought he buried his cock all the way inside of her, wrapped his arms around her body and rolled onto his back, pulling her on top.
She adjusted herself a bit so she could straddle him easier then began rocking her hips back and forth slowly. He ran his hands up her smooth legs, past her shapely hips, across her smooth soft stomach and finally he grabbed both of her breasts firmly, fondling and massaging them to both of their pleasure. She placed her hands on his chest to brace herself, then raised herself up until only the tip of his cock was still inside of her, then slammed down, fully impaling herself on his stiff pole.
He couldn't suppress his moans of pleasure, and neither could she as she rode him hard and fast, he moved his hands down from her breasts and grabbed her ass and began thrusting up to meet her. He smacked her ass hard, she moaned loudly arching her back a bit, and he could feel her already tight pussy squeeze his cock even tighter.
"FUCK..... smack it harder....smack it harder Daddy," she managed to say between her uncontrolled moaning and panting.
He repeatedly smacked both sides of her thick ass, leaving big red handprints, she rode him even faster bucking her hips furiously and moaning very loudly as she neared her climax.
He was also getting close to cumming again but he didn't want to just yet, he wanted to savor her even longer, so he wrapped his arms around her again and flipped her onto her back again. Swiftly he pulled his dick out of her, much to her dismay since she had been so close to her orgasm.
She started to protest, but stopped as he kissed down her neck, all across her breasts, down her navel, then veering to the left, he kissed her hip bone, then down the front of her thigh, then back up her inner thigh. He kissed slower as he neared what he was so very eager to taste, teasing her and building anticipation, he felt her hand grab the top of his head and pull him closer towards her beautiful pussy.
He reached up with one hand to massage her breasts, and used his other hand to slide 2 fingers into her sweet little pussy pushing slowly but firmly along the bottom of her pussy, as he flicked his tongue up and down her slit, sampling her juices. He used his tongue to lick a few quick circles around her clit before he started sucking on it, she writhed in pleasure and tightened her grip on his head, grinding his face into her pussy. He paused only when he had to breath as he continued to feast on her beautiful pussy, encouraged by her moans and the juices flowing down his hand he fingered her faster and slipped his pinky into her ass too.
She was panting and moaning loudly as he buried his face between her legs until he could barely breathe. Now that he had taken some time to let his dick rest, and she was hornier than ever he decided to kiss back up her body and whisper in her ear," I need to fuck you from behind, right now!"
She wanted it so bad she bent over the bed, slowly stretching out her arms in front of her and flattening her chest against the mattress, but keeping her ass raised invitingly. He grabbed her supple ass cheeks with both hands, he kneaded her soft flesh as he grinded his hard thick shaft between her thighs, rubbing and teasing her already eager pussy. He smacked her ass a couple more times, causing her to reach one of her hands in between her legs to rub her clit and spread her pussy open and began to push back against him repeatedly, " Come on, I need you inside me again," she moaned into her sheets.
He grabbed his shaft and stroked it a few times as he guided it towards his prize, he pushed the tip into her tight hole slowly, he placed his other hand on her hip and thrust all the way inside of her in one sharp motion, she tilted her head back as they both moaned loudly at the sudden burst of pleasure.
He stayed like that a while, letting her adjust after the rapid penetration, before pulling almost all the way out and he started to go slow and steady working the length of his shaft inside of her. It didn't take him long to speed up, she was throwing herself backwards to meet his thrusts, her ass clapping up against his thighs as they both got lost in their passion. He lifted one of her legs onto the bed, then the other, she hooked her arms behind her knees and raised her ass a little higher, he grabbed her shoulders and fucked her even harder. as he drilled into her, he had a naughty idea, he reached between her legs and rubbed her pussy to get her juices on his fingers, then he slowly pushed the first digit of his index finger into her extremely tight asshole.
She began to moan wildly with the added stimulation, she could feel her orgasm building as he slid more and more of his finger into her ass, after a minute he switched to using his thumb, pushing about and inch inside of her he held it there and gripped her ass with the rest of that hand. He gathered her hair into a ponytail and wrapped it around his hand pulling her head back as he thrusted into her as fast as he could manage, both of them were drenched in sweat and breathing heavily.
He had never experienced sex this phenomenal before, he was in utter heaven as he could feel the pressure building in his cock again it felt like it was going to explode," I'm so fucking close to cumming," he panted.
She was also right on the edge, in a strained voice she said," Cum inside me, please, I need to feel it, cum inside meeee."
In that instant he got an even naughtier idea, she hadn't specified where she wanted it inside of her, so he pulled his thumb out of her ass, and his cock out of her dripping pussy.
" WHY...why would you stop..," she started to say, but stopped as he slid the wet tip of his cock into her tight asshole, her eyes went wide and she couldn't suppress her shocked gasp as he entered her. A wave of pleasure overcame them both as his cock erupted, shooting steams of thick cum into her ass, splattering deep inside of her, the sudden feeling of getting his dick in her ass and getting filled up sent her over the edge, she screamed his name as she orgasmed while his warm load trickled out around his throbbing cock.
She loved the feeling of his cum slick member in her ass, and loved it even more as he pushed deeper inside, soaked with both of their juices his rod slowly impaled into her but it didn't take too long for her asshole to open up enough for him to get all the way inside of her.
He wasn't ready to stop yet despite how exhausted and sore he was already, he was being driven only by lust. He grabbed onto her hips, and started fucking her ass slowly, finding a new rhythm almost pulling out with each thrust, he would push it back in halfway a couple times then all the way inside her perfect little asshole. He continued this for a while as he gradually increased his speed, but this wasn't quite enough for the girl so she readjusted herself so her feet were on the floor again, her knees were bent and her palms on the bed.
She threw her ass back vigorously as he groped at her large breasts, holding on to them as if his life depended on it. His eyes were closed as he lost himself in pure ecstasy, between the tightness of her ass and all they had done, his cock was already sore and sensitive so he knew he couldn't handle this too much longer.
He still had a fantasy he wanted to live out before this was over so he halted his thrusts and leaned close to her ear and whispered," Put your hands on the wall Darling."
She smirked at him and slid off of his cock, she sauntered over to the wall, bent over and laid her palms flat against the wall, she arched her back low and raised her ass up inviting him to fill her up again. He guided his penis back inside of her and got back to work lustfully pounding her tender asshole, he reached between her legs and played with her clit.
After a couple moments he pulled out again, he spun her around and pushed her up against the wall. He then hooked his arms behind her knees and lifted her up so she could wrap her legs around his waist. She reached down and grabbed his cock, guiding it back into her tight hole for the finale.
He fucked her against the wall with everything he had left in his body, their moans and grunts were at a fever pitch now, as they stared into each others eyes passionately as he drilled into her. She wrapped her arms around his neck and used her legs to push him deeper inside, her perfect tits bounced in front of his face as they got closer and closer to their climax.
"Oh God, Oh God, i Can't hold it anymore," he grunted through gritted teeth, he felt like he was on fire and the pressure in his groin was too much to bear anymore.
She was so close too that she could barely even respond," Fill me ....fill me up again....," she managed to say before her orgasm overtook her, her body shook and spasmed which sent him over the edge. With a final few deep thrusts he shot all the cum he had left inside of her, completely exhausted they both slid down to the floor, breathing heavily they held onto each other as they tried to pull themselves back together.
" Well I wasn't expecting any of that tonight, I thought I'd be masturbating alone," she said breathlessly," I'm happy you decided to peek in on me." He had never been so sexually satisfied in his life, so he replied," Not as happy as I am, I think you drained me dry!"
He was so tired but so happy, and he wanted to make this night last forever so he said," I got an idea, I might be tapped out for now, but I'm guessing you have some toys right?"
She smirked and replied," I might have a few....or a whole box of them."
He chuckled a bit and said, "Once I can stand, you should go get your box of toys so I can keep playing with you.
"She giggled and smiled," I don't think you are prepared for all the toys I have, but this should be fun." The End?