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Comments from Robsam1991
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-11-15 04:05:07 | Summer Intern Chapter 1 - The Race | Good writing skills. And your story feels real too. Something that i can relate to, though sadly not something that i've had the fortune to experience. |
| 2017-01-01 11:42:32 | One Who Understands | This is a very long and epic story. Very well written. It can definitely pass as an erotic novel for men, if that sort of thing actually exist. With that said, good work. I've never seen such quality writing in this site before. You are even better than some actual novels i've read. Great kob. |
| 2016-07-17 12:58:19 | Being taught how to love again_(1) | Mind I suggest to you the follow excerpt... Then Kylie asked how I was getting along with Janna, and I said just fine. She said you two look cute together, and you better dance with her tonight. I said, look Kitten, I am not sure I am ready for that. And change it to... "How are things going with Janna?" Kylie gave me a conspiratorial smirk. "Things are fine." I said nonchalantly. "Why?" "Come on daddy. You two look cute together." Kylie hissed. "You better dance with her tonight." "Look, Kitten." I stopped dancing and held my daughter at arm's length. "I'm not sure if I'm ready for that." I sighed in resignation. Just saying :-) The story is interesting and a good read. Keep on writing. Cheers. |
| 2016-11-12 12:56:03 | Mistress in the Making Phase 3 | Hi Inkwriter1, sorry for the late reply. I haven't been in this website for quite some time. Anyways, I do wish to get your help in proofreading. But I don't know how to contact you. Perhaps i can give you my email address, but putting it up here is quite the risk. And I'm not sure if you will be able to read this message too. |
| 2016-07-26 16:47:58 | Mistress in the Making Phase 2 | I gave phase 3 a grammar check and edited a few things. It seems that even editing a few words warranted a reconfirmation of submission. I'm not sure when it will be published by XNXX team, but I hope it will be soon. Sorry for the inconvenience. |