| 2019-05-24 19:01:47 |
Take It If You Can_(0)
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Great short story, looking forward to him taking that ass!! |
| 2019-10-21 21:25:03 |
Pornstar: Audition
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Great story and story line. Can't wait to read more from you!! |
| 2019-12-05 22:44:10 |
a new life for Ruth part two
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A great story, long but well worth the read. I would try to break up the paragraphs to make reading easier. Also, lots of spelling mistakes, you need to have someone proof read your stories for you. A fresh set of eyes can make a big difference. Overall a great story line and ending. |
| 2019-12-05 22:44:23 |
a new life for Ruth part two
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A great story, long but well worth the read. I would try to break up the paragraphs to make reading easier. Also, lots of spelling mistakes, you need to have someone proof read your stories for you. A fresh set of eyes can make a big difference. Overall a great story line and ending. |
| 2019-12-05 23:10:27 |
Schoolgirl Trix
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great story, cant wait for more |