| 2020-11-23 01:51:50 |
The Erotic Adventures of a Bride-To-Be
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Definitely hot, but take your time telling the story! What's the rush? Secondly, better spelling and punctuation makes a story better to read and enjoy. It's "titties" not "tities". |
| 2020-11-30 02:11:00 |
Party Games (Edited)
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This isn't the place to be if you're concerned about morality. |
| 2020-11-30 02:36:31 |
After school drama party!
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Good beginning but have someone edit it for you. Stories are much more fun with correct spelling, punctuation, etc. |
| 2020-11-30 02:42:21 |
"Making My Sister Horny"
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Not as good as some of your stories and the frequent viewpoint changes were somewhat confusing. |
| 2020-11-30 02:45:59 |
Bridal Shower
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Getting married at 14 or 15? This story is poorly written and so unrealistic that I stopped bothering. |