| 2019-06-14 01:47:00 |
Sweet revenge and maybe a bit more (S1)
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Great potential, a few misspelled words, dump for dum as a example, English language not being your first language veey well done, like to see more parts to this story |
| 2019-07-04 01:44:33 |
Sheepshaggin'
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Dude, best story, you get jethro perfect, the emotion the conflicting feelings he has, the sex/love making scene is hot and romantic im going to read your other stories and add you to my favorite author and stories. |
| 2019-07-12 22:34:02 |
My bro and his hoe
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Good story, get spell check, google.doc app, would help out. Keep trying. You will get better. |
| 2019-07-17 12:29:56 |
The Chauffeur (#19) Diane and a Baby
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Paul your scene in the restaurant talking about military's pay was wrong. Military's pay is hourly, 24/7 52 weeks a year the hourly rate you put there is to high, its about half that for E-1's. |
| 2019-07-18 01:43:00 |
The Chauffeur (#24) The Weekend (part 1)
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Pablo great story love it, you had me worried that jill was letting all these guys cum in her pussy, when she wanted to get pregnant with her hubby baby. |