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Comments from Elbowsdeep
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-12-15 23:20:44 | Quarantined with Mom and My Sisters Chapter 5: Loving Mom and Two Hot Sisters | I feel like I shouldn't read this one until I find out what happened with Auburn in the shower. I was looking forward to that scene. |
| 2021-01-16 16:00:40 | Finding out Dad’s Secrets | Good story, but you need to work on correct tenses, you know; past, present, future. Also use proper punctuation: Mom said "Oh my GOD son, fuck my pussy!" as I pounded her. Break up paragraphs and avoid run-on sentences. Stuff like that will make the read through easier to understand. Other wise keep it up. |