| 2020-11-27 04:04:00 |
Grandma's Farm
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I was expecting more from your story. |
| 2020-11-27 05:45:35 |
A Class for the Curious
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I somehow get the feeling that English is not your first language. I would suggest that you get someone that is proficient in English to proofread your materials. I would also suggest that you get grammarly.com to aid you in your writing. |
| 2020-11-27 05:45:35 |
A Class for the Curious
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I somehow get the feeling that English is not your first language. I would suggest that you get someone that is proficient in English to proofread your materials. I would also suggest that you get grammarly.com to aid you in your writing. |
| 2020-11-27 06:55:28 |
My Pretty Little Slaves_(0)
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I am pleased with the start that you made in your story. I think that you might pay more attention to the quotations of your characters and I think you might take advantage of grammarly.com as an aid in your writing. |
| 2020-11-27 14:56:48 |
My Pretty Little Slaves_(1)
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I would like to see the characters' comments correctly constructed. I still think you would need to obtain grammarly.com to aid you and your story construction. |