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Comments from TonyMichaels
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-26 03:45:07 | Sarah's Submission: Ch 09 - Jenny Submits | If you started with the first chapter and have read to this point, I’d love to hear from you. If you like the direction of the story and any guesses you might have as to what will happen next. Or a favorite part. Even anything you don’t like. I am very open to criticism. Happy to respond to PMs if you don’t like public comments. |
| 2022-09-04 16:27:59 | The Education Game (Chapter 1) | Will there be a chapter 2? It’s been a while since the original submission. |
| 2022-09-06 00:22:09 | Sarah's Submission: Chapter 01 - Introducing Sarah | High praise throatHER, especially from someone with your reputation of intelligent comment in the Forums. I have read a lot of you feedback and really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I debated for some time on whether or not the tags should reflect the story or the chapter. I elected on the story as a whole and have kept them consistent for each submitted chapter. Mainly since there would be few tags for the first chapter and I worried about not attracting anyone without the promise of where the story would be going. I did try to warn that the story is more for the longform readers and not a quick short story. But your point is very well taken. It is probably too late to correct with 10 chapters already published, but will definitely keep in mind for future stories. I look forward to your opinion on the upcoming chapters! Thanks again for the feedback. |
| 2022-09-24 19:55:08 | Rachels little secret 01 | Not sure about a man being ejaculated while sleeping, but a fun read and well written. What fantasies are made of. |
| 2022-09-24 21:17:06 | Rachels little secret 04 | I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me. |