| 2012-04-22 19:07:26 |
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This is the best series of storys. I just think I should point out that, when talking about when he'll next see ash he says "I wouldn’t see her again until I was standing at the wedding standing under a canopy of trees, holding hands with Abby.". That's right, THE wedding, not HIS wedding. |
| 2012-04-22 19:39:37 |
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Sorry 'bout the doubble post, and it wasn't directed at the author, but at those that keep saying they KNOW he winds up with Abby. |
| 2012-06-20 21:57:53 |
Daddy's friend takes advantage of me
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Spell check, Grammer check, paragraph spacing. It's clear that english isn't your first language, so you should use these features of a word program to compensate. other than that, not bad. |
| 2012-06-20 21:58:16 |
Daddy's friend takes advantage of me
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Spell check, Grammer check, paragraph spacing. It's clear that english isn't your first language, so you should use these features of a word program to compensate. other than that, not bad. |
| 2012-07-25 04:10:53 |
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Interesting developments. Can't wait for another chapter. And I hope you give us an update on what happened with Ash soon, too. Great writing as usual. |