| 2011-04-04 16:42:57 |
My Godmother is my Lover
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well I liked it as a story it was very good. As I fucked the wife next door as a kid starting at 14 . all way though high school. & her mate was 16 years older then her. I gave her 3 kids. all he said was thanks. would haven'd love to see him knock her up . would love to read more. And for the guy who said he didn't like it say your name mate. if you don't write don't make bad remarks |
| 2011-04-04 16:55:47 |
Maryanne's Story - Waterskiing
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liked it all until the last line when you asked if your mate could come & was told that the other husband didn't want him to come. My wife did this to me as I served overseas. when I found out she went out the door fast & the guys got the crap beet out of them . but I didn't do a thing as theother wifes did it. |
| 2011-04-07 10:26:51 |
MOM WANTS TO BE MY CUM BUCKET! - CHAPTER 1
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Have one question where is the sister when this is going on Hoping he dose them both & gets them both in the family way |
| 2011-04-11 10:38:18 |
Lord Potter
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was hoping you would have posted more soon. but hope you will keep it going & don't let some fools get you down. As I'm not a great writer I love to read others work & say to the ones who don't sign in if you don't write don't make any waves to those who do. keep it going Dave |
| 2011-04-13 09:09:53 |
Harry Potter Adventures: Chapter 1 – 6th Year Begins
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well I realy enjoy it. As for them saying that you should stay with the books line. DON"T. Allways said that Harry shoud have got hermy & Ron with Luna. Ginny with Longbottom. But keep it going & make it a little longer. I think for a 1st time you did very well. I'm not a writer but read alot. say keep it going Dave |