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Comments from dav31092
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-05-21 13:32:38 | My True Love | There are a number of things you need to do. 1. Format better. 2. Make your stories longer. and 3. Do not have a character say something you already did. |
| 2011-05-21 13:37:39 | My True Love | There are a number of things you need to do. 1. Format better. 2. Make your stories longer. and 3. Do not have a character say something you already did. |
| 2011-05-21 22:48:11 | My 25 year old boyfriend | I gave a negative vote because of A the format and B the story didnt do it for me, |
| 2011-05-21 22:49:17 | Moms Sleepmask Secrets | I gave this a positive rating because it was well written but my only downside was that the story was kinda dull. |
| 2011-05-25 02:29:28 | next time write more then post because IMO this sucks the way it is |