| 2011-06-09 00:08:30 |
Redeeming Mom
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When you say it like that, yes it does sound a bit corny but that wasn't the words I wrote were they. Thanks for reading though. |
| 2011-07-12 08:44:25 |
Finally!
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Very good story. About time there was some lactation content in here. |
| 2011-07-15 15:23:15 |
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Maybe a little more on the backstory in the beggining and work on the punctuation. Other than that, not a bad story. Looking foward to reading more. |
| 2011-07-19 02:04:24 |
A bumpy ride to camp Crystal Lake - Part 2 - 6
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I agree. Theauthorranoutofideasfortwomoredaysofsex was fucking hilarious. A great add in for writers block. Great job. I ejoyed the whole read. |
| 2011-11-28 15:46:07 |
Two week vacation part 1(revised and added to)
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I agree. Decent story. I enjoyed reading it and also agree you need a proof reader. If you haven't found one yet, I would be happy to take it on. Just let me know. |