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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-03-12 16:55:21 | Jason's Little Family: The Beginning Chapter 22 | I just wanted to let everyone know that I've started posting my regular writing online. If you like my writing style and want to check out my regular (nonadult) writing then pm me and I'll give you the website. |
| 2009-03-25 18:38:35 | Jason's Little Family: The Beginning Chapter 23 | I don't usually bother to comment on one of my ongoing stories but I decided to reply because of a couple comments on this chapter. First of all let me remind everyone that this story is a prequel to an earlier short story I wrote called Jason's Little Family (misprinted as Jaon's Little Family in the story forum). Some of the events in this story reflect things that already happened in that short story including the mother being dead before the girls seduced their father and the fact that their father died before he could knock Nancy up for the second time. As far as Nancy's reaction is concerned let me point out that both Nancy and Karen are in shock at their father's sudden death. As for Nancy she's focusing on what she and her father were trying to do (ie, getting a second baby in her belly) and that allows her to keep going instead of becoming a broken down wreck. In time her father's death will hit her like a ton of bricks, but just after his death she's focused on the bab |
| 2009-04-07 05:59:18 | Jason's Little Family: The Beginning Chapter 23 | Why thank you, you do realize that doing art (or writing) for the sake of art with no regard for the audience is the mark of a true artist. So thank you. |
| 2009-04-27 22:47:50 | Pornacopia Brown Chapter 1 | I post on a few sites but it's possible someone is posting my stuff without permission, could you pm me with the name of the other site? Thanks |
| 2009-05-03 15:48:27 | Pornacopia Brown Chapter 2 | I think you're wrong. Just because a woman stops having her period that doesn't mean she stops lubricating. In fact, if juices stopped flowing when a woman was pregnant she'd know when she was pregnant and wouldn't need a pregnancy test, but she would need some kind of lubrication or any kind of fucking would be very painful and damage her vagina. |