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Comments from jme69
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-05-11 21:34:21 | Prom Night_(3) | First of Signing in is not at all difficult. I found two typos. Grammer and puncuation. For the most part is correct. The Story it self, Well It sucks. Jimmy it is not your best work. Sorry |
| 2012-05-20 20:03:49 | Waiting_(2) | People have to edit their work. when you read or when your typing dble enter between paragraphs this will put a space between one paragraph and the next. It makes it much easyer to read if the story is not in one big block. JME69 |
| 2012-05-20 20:31:37 | Michael's naughty little stepsister | Okay love, Take your time don't rush let the story flow out how it wants, then proof read. I never know what I have wrote till I go back through it. Make your charicters believable. A fourteen year old with masive hooters. Possable, but not plausable. Never rush a story. keep it neat, keep it clear, Keep it believable. (Within paramiters. Fantasy has to have some streatch of belief) and you will be golden. JME69 |
| 2012-05-30 23:39:25 | Daddy's little Sex Doll | Do not complain there are no Paragraphs without letting her know how to put them in. Loading the damn story takes away the Paragraphs. Its not her fault. Someone needs to Post the Way to keep Paragraphs at the point before you submit your storys. |
| 2012-05-31 02:22:35 | Little Red (modern day) | Three wolves, One in each opening. Yummy |