| 2015-04-18 11:56:40 |
Grandpa's Milk
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Great start to a good story. You should consider posting on Asstr also as you can include ages in your stories; definitely a nice touch. |
| 2015-04-18 12:13:14 |
Grandpa's Milk- Chapter 2
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Definitely looking forward to each chapter. |
| 2015-04-20 11:36:39 |
The opening, pt 1
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Well written story and looking forward to reading more chapters just to see what happens. |
| 2015-04-20 12:16:08 |
The Openings, pt4
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This story is a little too dark for me. The insertion of the snake in Emma is pretty messed up. I would rather read stories without the coercion and the one doing the coercion not being such a nut-job. Chapter 4 seemed somewhat tame compared to the others. The guy is still one sicko though. Keep writing "young fiction" but maybe more on the "normal" side. :) |