| 2014-05-15 15:09:09 |
Boy in the grass 57
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What the hell? Why would anybody give this story a negative vote? The story is fantastic. The plot is thought out. The flow of the story is smooth. Spaceing is so good you know who is talking when. The writer listens to advice from his fans, without letting them ruin the story. Nothing but positive votes from me. Keep em coming. |
| 2014-12-23 05:23:55 |
A New Day, A New You part 4
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Why is your writing like a freaking drug? And when did I become a addict? And waiting for the next chapter is like waiting for my next fix. Its toruture man . I just finished this chapter, and am already in need of my next fix. |
| 2014-05-22 22:16:27 |
Boy in the grass 60
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Can someone find out who keeps giving this story negative volts and slap them for being stupid? This should have 100% likes. Nothing less. |
| 2014-04-24 12:45:57 |
Boy in the grass 45
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I wouldn't mind seeing Davidson join the adults. Marge, Suzy, and June once she has her body again. But Davidson won't touch the underage kids. He just don't seem like he would be into underage girls. And to tell the truth I don't think the girls need another man. The women on the other hand could use a man more around their age. |
| 2014-04-24 12:21:42 |
Boy in the grass 45
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I think I would like to see a romance / love happen between Jenna and Evan. As I can see them being good friends with the family. But Max and the other kids don't need more lovers in thier group. Also Max could use a guy best friend, like say, Evan. |