| 2015-07-11 05:48:44 |
Such is Life 12
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To the last person who commented, thank you very much for your positive feedback! I make many mistakes that many are quick to point out, which helps, but positive feedback such as yours make me realize that I have made a few improvements, so thank you! |
| 2015-07-17 11:49:26 |
Allison 5
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Big mahalo for the feed back to you all! Gives me hope that I may be improving a little! I am currently working on a love story now, stay tuned! |
| 2015-12-03 00:02:20 |
My Beautiful Brianna 3
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To the anonymous commenter telling me to write a book, I've actually considered it... |
| 2015-12-03 00:12:37 |
Allison 4
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Oh damn! I just read some of the comments here and I'm floored. First to the constructive critics, thank you. To those who are attacking them, give them slack. The are one of the reasons I am striving to improve. Obviously I have a ways to go, but their criticisms help me a lot. To those with positive feedback, you too are the reasons I am striving to improve. To the anonymous reader who compared my stories to 50 shades of Grey, I don't even know what to say, but thank you I'm incredibly flattered... |
| 2015-12-12 04:04:26 |
My Hair is Stuck
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Excellent story!! I'm thinking of writing a daddy daughter story myself, this inspired me!! |