| 2021-05-26 21:26:46 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ
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Non-consensual sex, reluctance and cheating for the de***********ion of your tale. I think you meant to put rape. |
| 2021-05-26 21:40:42 |
Inviting the new neighbors to a BBQ - 2
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Loved that chapter. Awesome writing. |
| 2021-05-04 02:15:57 |
Marie's Mind Control - 2
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Fantastic story but it became extremely annoying that almost every sentence her brother said to her she had to be called "sis." Yeah, we already know that they are brother and sister. What's the use in reinforcing the issue to the point of annoyance. |
| 2021-05-10 21:32:25 |
My Teacher's Weekend
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I think this story should come with a warming. Do not try this at home. This is a very fake story. Kidnapping anyone and raping them will not get them to fall for you or become a willing partner and you will go to jail. It's about as real as any adult woman becoming intoxicated by the crotch of a male teenagers scent. (that part was hilarious) |
| 2021-05-23 08:47:50 |
Potential Part 30_(1)
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So is chapter 36 as far as the story goes. It seems a shame to have spent so much time reading a story, going from site to site only to find out that it has been abandoned. It started jumping all over the place and seemed to have a lot of plot holes that would have been nice to have been filled. |