| 2012-12-18 14:22:54 |
Amber's new teacher
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A hot story, very well told. Who wouldn't want to hear her say "Yes sir, please sir"? |
| 2013-03-09 14:51:41 |
Boat in the Bay of Naples
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You're a good writer but c'mon, it has to be a tiny bit believable so people can get into it. I feel like you threw in the towel on this one. |
| 2013-03-24 18:04:36 |
My guitar teacher
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I can't believe this hasn't been rated higher. Annie in the story is totally sexy and believable. |
| 2013-04-08 23:22:55 |
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Another win. THANKS, Purvv! |
| 2013-04-08 10:45:03 |
Jamie
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Hot story. This could have been three parts, with more detail in each one. I hope you write more, and I have a feeling you will. :) |