| 2013-04-11 12:30:03 |
Nightly Sins Pt. 4
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This isn't very believable but it's very hot. I loved John breaking in her ass. The writing style changed for her, which was a nice touch and probably difficult to do. Great job, keep these coming! |
| 2013-04-30 12:32:44 |
Losing My Love
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This was terrific. The simple writing style made the story feel like it was genuinely being told by a girl who had recently lost her first love. I hope you don't write a sequel because it would cheapen the beauty in this one. (But I hope you keep writing more stories like this one.) |
| 2013-05-21 13:58:48 |
Little girl doing winter swimming and lot of sex_(1)
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Your English made this a little hard to read but the story was amazing and you told it well. I hope you write more. |
| 2013-06-26 18:48:03 |
With an older man
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That story was amazing. The way you told it made it feel authentic, tender and horny as hell. Thanks! |
| 2014-08-20 22:23:36 |
"Close your eyes and open your mouth" Part 2
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This series is quickly becoming one of my favorites. Great job! |