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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2012-11-06 15:45:54 | The Fisherman & The Mermaid-Chap. 1 & 2 | Don't take this to think I didn't like the story, in fact I gave all installments a positive rating and this is on my favorites list. But... hypothermia takes a lot out of a person. It's really unlikely that a person will be after energetic, climbing-on-top sex the same day. After getting her body temp back up and and a meal in her belly, she should've passed out. Passed out is the correct term, as in a sleep so deep to be virtually unconscious. |
| 2012-11-08 17:07:47 | A Step Father's Revenge | People can't do simple math. Rene is thirteen, about to turn fourteen, in this story. The divorce came "three years later" when her mom found out about it. 13+3=16 Sixteen is the age of consent in thirty US States plus DC, assuming this takes place in the US. So while there may be moral or ethical issues with a situation like this, the main legal issue is non-existant. |
| 2012-11-18 17:58:51 | You belong to me_(0) | In the first paragraph it's "my baby sister", then for the rest of the story he's younger than her. Also, there's apparently a seven-year age difference between them... which means in the beginning he's seven years old when he's lusting after his sister when she's fourteen. |
| 2013-02-10 03:51:35 | Interesting story so far. Frankly, I find myself skipping the (as others have pointed out) very redundant sex scenes and enjoying the rest of the tale. Worth a read. |
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| 2013-04-19 06:39:13 | I Was a Virgin Nymphomaniac | No need to apologize. It was meant in good humor. Alas, I am not good enough to convey that through text. Which is why I read here, rather than write. I was trying to point out the irony, where it's stereotypically the men objectifying the women. Please don't interpret my previous comment to mean that I didn't like your story, or to mean that you shouldn't write more. |