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Comments from redeemed
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-04-19 07:11:18 | I Was a Virgin Nymphomaniac | "But I'm not sure we objectify men less." I'm pretty sure you don't. I'm fairly confident it's very close to equal. Note I used the word "stereotypically" instead of "typically". The stereotype of males objectifying females seems to be much more prevalent then the other way around. "Not sure why I was logged out." Timer. You need to be active on the forum (not here, this isn't the forum) periodically or you're logged out for inactivity. Same reason my first comment was anonymous. |
| 2013-05-09 22:37:32 | Zema Nov - Chapter 1 A new life | When using another author's fantasy setting and characters, you should get permission first. Or at the very least state that your story is based heavily on the work of another person. |
| 2013-06-26 05:07:15 | Bus Ride Home_(0) | You should try to find someone who can proofread for you. There's a lot of little mistakes that they would catch. Homonyms- "peek" instead of "peak", "report" instead of "rapport", etc. Also the bus driver's gender mysteriously switched during the story. |
| 2013-07-19 01:57:42 | Phase III of the autobiography | Okay, I'm calling bullshit. You claim this is a true story, you just turned sixty, and when you were in your twenties your wife had a cell phone that she left in the bedroom on the nightstand. Portable phones of 30+ years ago were extremely rare, and briefcase-sized. |
| 2013-08-27 09:22:59 | ..."A Pixie's Magic" and feature a thing I've yet to find in any other story on the site... So far the basic premise is very similar to Piers Anthony's "The Bridge". Granted, that's not on this site and it was originally published around forty-five years ago so not many teens are familiar with it. |