| 2011-07-04 22:26:29 |
Hot Summer
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Proof read, proof read, proof read. Good story but did I mention you should proof read? |
| 2011-08-01 17:57:19 |
Siblings can't be Separated
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Plagerism is wrong. I gave you a negative vote. Write your own stories. |
| 2011-08-09 08:23:35 |
When I Was a Kid Part VII
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Thanks Carl, as always I appreciate all comments. Readers please comment or at least vote. It lets the writer know if we are on the right track. Thanks for reading. |
| 2011-08-29 22:16:22 |
My cousin and I_(4)
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We have got to have another part. A series would be great! Wish it could have been a virginity story. Can't have everything I guess. Like to get her pregnant though. |
| 2011-09-05 11:31:36 |
Amy's Panties- Part 3- Amy's Birthday
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In the first story her panties were pink that she put between the rocks. Now they're white? She is sixteen so she would be a sophomore not a freshman. I loved the story. Pay closer attention to detail. Very good! |