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Comments from Hugh_Jardon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2011-12-30 14:21:58 | Secret Room 3 | I agree with ombligo. WTF? It went from maybe plausible to unbelievable in a heartbeat. The boy was at his grandparents, now he's a school? Come on, think, it's not illegal yet. |
| 2011-12-30 14:40:37 | Secret Room 4 | From loving mother to total slut.........I'm done. |
| 2012-01-07 21:25:13 | Summer surprise_(3) | Toewars? Is that like Thumb Wars? He was historical? What does history got to do with it? She's tried from swimming? How about tired? I gave up! It's a good story but you need to proofread. |
| 2012-03-04 09:01:14 | Home alone_(4) | Well, I liked the story spelling and grammer aside. Two questions or observations. One, if she was using the dildo to fuck herself how was the hymen still intact? Two, there was no mention of birth control so did she get pregnant? Alot of us perverts like a good pregnancy story. |
| 2012-08-10 16:49:47 | The girl across the street_(3) | I really liked the story. It could use more detail in the sex. Take your time. I'm not the grammar nazi but sentences start with a capital letter and 'I' is always capitalized. Use spell check. |