| 2019-06-20 20:02:53 |
The Mystery Caller
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Not at all believable! How could he not know the voice of someone he has known so long? Better ending would have had his friends mother be just a horny person and not the "special" lover. |
| 2019-06-22 08:57:43 |
The Daring Naughty Sleepover 2_(1)
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Please, a third chapter. |
| 2019-09-04 05:15:47 |
Behind the Church Shed_(0)
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Voted positive, Do have a few concerns. Moves a bit too slow. Promises good things but takes too long getting to them. Some aren't worth the wait. The shy boy doesn't seem the type to be jerking off outside. The woman doesn't read as a person who would risk so much for a skinny, shy kid who jacks off outside. |
| 2019-09-15 22:46:12 |
Loving my Pappa
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Every dick is 7" or bigger and too hefty for girls of an age to get their hands around. Boo. Every woman or girl is as beautiful as the Madonna. This over-stating ruins stories, for me. I like your writing style. Try to avoid describing perfect people and simply comment on their natural beauty. Read some Hemingway |
| 2019-09-25 21:05:23 |
Pic Swap
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Enjoyed the story very much, It felt real! Why it was put in SOLO is beyond me and believe a lot of people may have missed it for that readon |