| 2020-02-01 05:39:32 |
Daddy's Girl_(0)
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Rape is never a good topic for a story, in my opinion. |
| 2020-12-28 18:45:35 |
My not so bright stepsister Part 01
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Difficult to rate this story. Everyone is or wants to abuse her. In fact she is being abused sexually. She doesn't know what is being done in truth but likes it very much. Thus my predicament . It is eminently wrong to take advantage but as little as she knows she does know she is having fun. I gave this portion of the story a +. |
| 2021-07-06 16:30:44 |
I went to India and..
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Your story is interesting to me because my story is similar. I went to India with the US Peace Corps in the sixties and found my way into the local gay community near Poona. Were I to write my story I would add the names of the cities, states, etc. to add color to a rather boring story (I went to India, met some guys with big dicks - twice! Enjoyed it so I "became" gay. |
| 2021-10-03 16:17:22 |
Just a Trim, Please
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Too long to accomplish anything. Not at all believable. Learn to write with fewer words. Your use of the language and its words is quite good. |