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Comments from naughtydragon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-02-25 07:32:22 | Gym Teacher 1 | I loved the story, the characters actually felt like real people you could connect with. Your writing style drives me crazy though. Use quotes, create paragraphs, end sentences. It will make it much more readable. |
| 2017-02-26 07:39:24 | The Imperfect Storm Chapter 1 | I like where this is going. I do think it's kind of weird that the name of the story is the story referenced in the story. It's a little meta. Looking forward to the next chapter though. |
| 2018-02-27 20:45:21 | Aunt Jean_(0) | Really enjoyed this. I look forward to the sequel you promised in the intro. |
| 2018-02-27 20:57:48 | The Secrets of Liberty Mountain - Chapters 1 -32 *UPDATED* | I just discovered this story, and I’m really enjoying it. That being said, black powder is a pretty substandard explosive for mines and traps. They’re a mining company, at the very least they should be able to get legal access to commercial/mining explosives. Also, a cursory search of survivalist and gun enthusiasts websites should have pointed them in the direction of .50 caliber sniper rifles for sniping and light anti- material work. Finally, 7.62 is a much deadlier round than 5.56, and AK variants stand up better to battle field conditions with less maintenance. I’m not a gun expert, and I don’t play one on TV, but Brenda should have had that much knowledge at a minimum as a former soldier working in modern hot zones. |
| 2021-07-14 16:21:40 | Mwah! 2 | You’ve got the wrong title on this story. This has no relation to Mwah! Which makes me sad, because I really liked Mwah! And was looking forward to a second chapter. |