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Comments from naughtydragon
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2020-10-16 21:36:42 | Masturbating with Amy, Chapter One | Well done, nice to see a story where they are talking their time, not because of a choice, but because they are just learning and taking small steps. I look forward to what's next. |
2021-01-27 06:37:54 | How Polygamy Begins - 5-1 | I was very excited to see a new chapter of this. I was thinking about this story the other day. Looking forward to the arrival of the parents and Melly and J explaining the situation to them. |
2021-03-19 21:55:22 | Dad gets his wish | Good story, but I would love to know why he can’t date, and why Jess never dated. A part 2 should definitely open with them talking about it. |
2021-03-19 22:09:37 | My Friend My Cousin Marie | The hesitation, the slow advances, well done. Looking forward to more in this style. |
2021-03-16 05:39:46 | The fiery Doctor Part three | You put so much work into the development of the relationships, and then completely blow it on a fairly important scene. The police would not be questioning Kat without an adult present unless they were trying to get the case thrown out. Then, for Emily to come in and say "I fixed it" the same night, before a n ADA has even been consulted on the case... no. I understand that whole point of the scene with the cops was to get to the showdown between Kat and Em, but that scene took me so far out of the story I couldn't even appreciate what was going on in the aftermath. Looking forward to chapter 4. |