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Comments from naughtydragon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-04-01 04:11:14 | Mickey and Kat - Episode 2 | Good story. I agree with throat that this didn't really need a sequel, but it was an enjoyable read. It was nice to catch up with Kat and Mickey again. |
| 2021-04-03 08:08:56 | Vacation By The Lake:1 | I want to read this story, I really do. I like a good brother/sister story. But I. Just. Can’t. Paragraphs, quotations, grammar. Please. If you’re going to put forth the effort to produce the story, take a little longer to format it so it can be read. |
| 2021-04-04 02:04:49 | The Essay | it was well written, which is always a plus. I stories like this I always the adults to be just a little more adult. When she asks him why he thought she turned it in, I would have liked for him to say something along the lines of, "The first option is because you know what your neighbor did was was, and you want some help figuring out how to deal with it, or..." |
| 2021-04-19 23:03:23 | Road Trip to Remember | Good story. Would have liked for the conversation between Luke and Kathy in the car to be a little more back and forth, get a sense of her own desire. Tthe formatting needs work. "Kathy says" is not a paragraph. fixing the formatting will probably keep this story in the 25 for weeks. |
| 2021-06-05 14:40:39 | The Redheaded Stepchild | I was excited to see a new story from you. Even happier after I read it. That was amazing. It was a nice change of pace to see the “broken” girl get it together and fight for a better life. Well done. |