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Comments from naughtydragon
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-09-01 20:37:48 | Compartments | I was excited to see this pop up, haven't seen anything from you in a while. This was a great story. The sex was hot, as always, but more importantly was your characterization. I like the way the MC talked about compartmentalizing his life, it was excellent. |
| 2020-09-02 21:55:26 | Being Jim Ch.6 Lessons of Life pt6 | Oh, wow. That was a roller coaster. This is the first one of your stories that I have read. The intro said this was nothing like your other stories. That makes me kind of sad. I really, really liked this. The way you captured Jim's uncertainty about Michelle in the early meetings, the way he questioned himself and her reactions to him; it was very well done. I loved the way you captured the essence of that first young love between Jim and Michelle. This chapter crushed me. I binge read this, it's the only thing I've been reading for the last 3 days. When Michelle died, I know the madness of that grief, and you captured it. I wept for Maggie. Thank you for the time and the heart you put into this. |
| 2020-09-08 14:57:01 | Tom's parallel world | This was a good start. I would say don’t leave out the “padding.” As a straight fuck story, this is okay, but the best parts of it are the world development. Leave that in, that’s what makes this worth reading. Looking forward to more story from you. |
| 2020-09-10 14:22:16 | The House on Montague Street | Him not fucking her mother was a nice surprise. The story moved a little fast. It could easily have been half again as many words and still been an excellent story. |
| 2020-09-10 16:50:57 | The House on Montague Street | NCFan, are you kidding? I loved Naked Day. Admittedly, I’m a little behind on that one, but I liked what you put into that. I liked that we got to know those characters as people. |