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Comments from Daddycums
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-04-06 10:19:33 | Daddy's Dirty Girl | I personally don't have any problem with them getting another girl involved (and that's a story I would love to read). It's already established that he's not a one-woman man, and the daughter knows this. This was a great story, and aside from a couple of formatting problems with the paragraphs, I really have no complaints. -Daddycums |
| 2010-04-12 00:43:11 | A Very Difficult Daughter | I just finished reading this story for the second time. It's a rare story that's just as good the second time, but this one definitely is. Like others mentioned, I wouldn't have minded if Sally got involved, but this story didn't need it. It's a beautiful romance as-is. To those who said it had too much of a build-up, I completely disagree. It needed time for the love to develop between the characters, or it wouldn't have been believable. Besides, by the time Jeff fell in love with Kylie, so did I. I do agree with those who said that the ending was a little abrupt. It didn't really hurt the story, but it felt like you were trying to cram in too much into just a few paragraphs. I personally would have ended it where Sally moved back in with her dad, with just a wink and a hint that Kylie would be spending a lot of time at her friend Sally's house from now on. But that's just me. If I were scoring this story, I wouldn't dock you any points for it. A solid 10/10. -Dad |
| 2010-04-13 09:56:49 | A Very Difficult Daughter | READER 2010-04-12 12:07:03: You're not fooling anyone. You're a pro-Obama zealot trying to make the other side look like a bunch of inbred rednecks without a brain cell between them. I say that because the alternative is that you're exactly what you appear to be, and it's depressing to think that there are people like that in this world. If that's the case, I weep for you. If you have a political opinion, it would do far more good on a political forum. Posting it here is going to accomplish exactly nothing. |
| 2010-04-25 11:10:55 | An Unusual Hotel.... | As soon as Sarah reached the courtyard, the words of Hotel California started running through my mind. Nice to see that the author was thinking exactly the same thing. Very hot in a creepy sort of way. I'll give it a pass on the parts I don't like (anal sex, transsexuals) because the rest is so good. I still gave it a positive rating. |
| 2010-04-28 14:42:54 | On a Moonlit Night, Wishes May Come True | Thanks! This one is definitely a departure for me. I came up with the idea to do something different from my usual themes when we were discussing anonymizing the entries for the contest. I liked the idea so much that although we gave up on the anonymous idea, I just had to write it. I'm glad you figured out what's going on in the story. I didn't want to just come right out and say it, but I didn't want it to be too subtle either. I'm especially glad you enjoyed the lesbian scene. I think that's the hardest kind of scene for a male author to make realistic because we have no way to experience it from the point of view of any of the characters involved. So I don't know if it was realistic, but I'll settle for "EXCELLENT." :-) -Daddycums |