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Comments from Daddycums
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-05-06 22:20:33 | Angelina’s Seduction and Brad’s Naked Surrender | Wow! I can't believe JackassTales wrote this; it's so completely different from what he's done before. Not that I'm complaining. I really enjoyed the story. I especially liked how it was so full of irony; Angelina arresting her ex- (or so she thinks) husband, Angelina trying to introduce evidence over the objections of his lawyer when that evidence ultimately exonerates him. I also enjoyed the whole small-town atmosphere, where everybody knows everybody. In fact, everybody seems to be related to everybody! Plus it was had some mega sexy scenes. Of course, the whole courtroom drama part wasn't that realistic; no judge would allow last-minute evidence like that without at least calling a recess to allow both sides time to examine it. But I already know the stories of JackassTales aren't meant to be realistic; they're still believable in the context of the story itself. A solid 9.5/10 and a positive vote. |
| 2010-05-06 09:34:13 | Love at Second Sight | READER 2010-05-06 07:47:28: It's about time you started attacking me. After all the attention you've been paying the other talented authors on this site, I was beginning to feel left out. I was wondering if maybe I wasn't good enough for you. I feel a lot better now that I've finally achieved the same status as the other wonderful authors on this site. Thanks, and bring it on! -Daddycums |
| 2010-05-18 20:49:01 | Solitude Interrupted | Great science fiction, hot sex, and beautiful writing. I usually don't like fan fiction, but I'll excuse you for that because if you had made it just some generic holodeck-like device, people would have complained that you were copying from Star Trek. This way, you come right out and admit it, so everything's fine. I do think it's fascinating that you start the story from the viewpoint of a character who doesn't exist in the context of the "real world" of the story. Very few holodeck creations have had consciousness, and you make no claim that this is one of them. How can she even have a viewpoint then? Can you do that? It seems like you're breaking some kind of rule there, but that's what good science fiction is all about: breaking rules. In short, very nice! -Daddycums |
| 2010-05-18 20:53:47 | Role Confusion | Next time, PLEASE include something in the tags to indicate there's gay male stuff in here. I'm tempted to vote this story down because you didn't warn me ahead of time, but I'll cut you a break because it's a contest entry and I'm reading all contest entries regardless of the tags so that I can be fair in my voting. -Daddycums |
| 2010-05-19 12:15:22 | Sexy, steamy, and above all, realistic. Characters who act the way you expect them to. It's not all lollipops and roses; both Danny and Ellen don't know what they're doing and end up giving mixed signals. But you can tell that they still love each other, and despite the fact that they don't end up together permanently, that love remains strong between them, and that's really all that matters. I normally prefer a little more fantasy and a little less realism, but this story is still very satisfying. -Daddycums |