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| 2010-07-26 20:33:52 | I guess I really DID need a vacation! | Sexy, romantic, and with a real story behind it. What's not to like? I would have preferred if you skipped over most of the details in the early parts of the story and just summed up the encounter in a few paragraphs, but it didn't ruin the story by any means. Once Kevin bumped into Marianne, from then on it was a perfect erotic romance. Well done. |
| 2010-07-26 20:43:19 | Contest entry: Bonds of youth | A sweet teen romance. Definitely an emotional rollercoaster, and I'm glad you ended it happily. It made me fall in love with Bell, root for Theodore, and hate Dominic, which I assume is what you were going for, so you did your job well. I liked that you confined the sex to dreams. After Theodore's profession that he would never take advantage of Bellissa, it was the perfect place to end the story, before they actually went all the way. I'll admit that I found the flow of the narrative a bit choppy in places, and I think the story could have used a little more proofreading, but it didn't ruin it. All in all, a very good story. -Daddycums |
| 2010-07-26 20:47:52 | Very nice. You did a good job of capturing the feeling of a rustic Welsh farm while simultaneously setting up a very modern plot. Nothing too original about it, but that's not really the point. The beauty is not in the story, but in the telling of the story, and you did that very well. Definitely worth a positive vote. -Daddycums |
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| 2010-07-29 01:34:31 | If Only. | dc daddycums: What a coincidence! You and I practically have the same name! If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were trying to tarnish my reputation on this site by posting mindless drivel under my name. Nah. No one would be low enough to do that, would they? -the real Daddycums |
| 2010-07-29 01:47:32 | John’s Last Summer | A beautiful tale of young love. The characters were not just believable, but realistic. I could really picture the awkwardness of Joseph when talking with Jane, the "good guy" John charming Kamala, and the whole teen curiosity thing surrounding the porn magazines. You wrote all of this really well, drawing me into the story and making me cheer on the characters. These aren't the larger-than-life characters you meet in other stories, but just regular joes with all their fumbling and awkwardness and foibles but ultimately very likable. I agree that double-spacing the paragraphs would have been nice instead of the "wall of text," but it didn't bother me as much as it obviously bothered Reader 2010-07-26 19:44:53, who I urge to read the story anyways because otherwise you're really missing out. -Daddycums |